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  1. jengennaco

    Hi, Mary,
    You noticed some important writing moves that Alexie made in his essay. His use of imagery is important as well as his repetition. As you begin developing your draft, think about ways that you might incorporate imagery or other narrative elements to help the reader understand your mindset and the expectations around your learning. I look forward to learning more about your experience.

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